Swedes' Ferry by Allan Safarik was disappointing. The plot is a mite week. While the action does pick up in the last few chapters, most of the book is quite placid with incessant, and quite unnecessary, explanations of Les's or Buck's life. Or, that of the Pinkerton detectives. Add that to the intruding historical explanations and Swedes' Ferry began to read like a work of non-fiction. I dislike a narrator who wants to explain the history of the story, especially one who speaks from today. It is jarring and takes away from the 'in-the-present' story telling. I want to follow Les and Bud and everyone else's story 'as-it-happens.' To make this reader's life more miserable, chapters jump between characters and time. One chapter might follow Bud in July, and the following chapter will follow Les in May. I don't know if it is a rule of story telling but it ought to be: chapters can jump between points in time or between characters but not both at once. It takes this reader out of the story as I try to keep everything straight. There is even a section where it seem Safarik himself became muddled. A story set in the past should try to refrain from modern language in the spoken direct speech of the characters: that's another rule of mine. Within reason, characters in an western set in 1894, should talk like they belong there rather than having accidentally arrived in a time machine. The Pinkerton characters keep referring to the collection of data. Data? That is a word that was very rarely used in speech in the 1890s. How about 'clue' or even the more authentic 'clew' found in detective fiction of the time? Too many words just didn't ring true in the mouths of Les and Bud and the Pinkerton detectives. Swede's Ferry could have used a bit more action, and a lot less explanation. Show, don't tell. And, Swede's Ferry could have anchored itself more firmly in 1894.
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